The missing final scene of Avatar….
OPEN
EXT. SPACE.
SUBTITLE: 7 Years Later.
A Huge ominous SPACECRAFT moves toward camera. It is similar in design to the human CRYO TRANSPORT from AVATAR. However, this craft is designed for war. Racks of missiles hang off it and it has military markings on it. Clearly this is a dangerous warship.
INT. INSIDE THE SHIP. THE CRYO CHAMBERS.
A weightless figure (Male, 20s, Military look) floats over to a CRYO TUBE, presses a release and the tube slides out revealing a human figure inside. He is male, mid 40s and has a military style look also. He is waking up but seems disoriented.
FLOATING FIGURE
Good morning Sergent. It looks like we’re almost at the destination. Enjoy your cryosleep.
SERGENT
Feels like I’ve been kicked in the head. Lets get to this.
The SERGENT pulls himself out of the tube, and pushes off towards a door at the end of the shot.
EXT. SPACE
Close on the MISSILES, the pulls out and swings around to see the moon PANDORA, lush and green.
INT. BRIDGE
The room is set up like the bridge of a battleship. It is super high tech with transparent screens with readouts on PANDORA. There is a central display at the front of the room showing a display of the planet. five MILLITARY OFFICERS are manning the computer terminals. They are dressed in near future military uniforms.
ENTER THE SERGENT.
SERGENT
SIX YEARS IN CRYO FOR THIS, AH WELL, LETS SHOW THESE BLUE BASTARDS THAT NOONE DICKS WITH HUMANITY.
BRIDGE OFFICER
TARGET LOCKED. AWAITING ORDERS.
SERGENT
THEY KILLED OVER A HUNDERED PEOPLE ON A CIVILLIAN BASE, AND SENT THE REST PACKING ON SHIPS THAT COULD NEVER MAKE IT. THEY SHOWED NO MERCY. FIRE.
EXT. SPACE.
The missiles begin to detach from the ship and rocket towards the planet. Hundreds of them. As one rack empties, another one pops up and unloads. We track the missiles as they head towards PANDORA.
EXT. PANDORA
In the lush forest we see the Na’vi playing, riding their alien-horses and climbing among the trees. The shot looks to the shy as one of the missiles impacts into the ground with an awesome thud. There is quiet for a second as thE Na’vi look confused. Then it explodes. It is a nuclear fireball of epic proportion, the shockwave incinerating trees and animals even berore contact.
EXT. SPACE.
The entire planet of PANDORA is being incinerated, explosions devastating the surface. After 15 seconds of total destruction their is quiet. The one green Pandora is now an ashen wasteland.
INT. THE BRIDGE.
The now devastated PANDORA is showing on the viewscreen.
SERGENT
AND THAT IS WHAT HAPPENS WHREN YOU FUCK WITH HUMANITY.
ALRIGHT. GET SOME R AND R AND GET BACK TO CRYO. IN 12 YEARS WHEN THE RADIATION HAS DISPERSED, WE MINE THAT SUCKER DRY.
END.
6 Comments
Is it possible that you may have put too much thought in to this!?
I like it either way, they should consider adding to the DVD special features
don’t be stupid, how would this lead into the inevitable porno gore sequel “Na’Vi go crazy ape bonkers with a drill and sex” ?
1) When did the Na’vi actually attack the corporate base in the film? I seem to recall them acting in defense of their home.
2) When did they kill civilians who weren’t heavily armed mercenaries trying to kill them first?
3) How do you figure the humans were sent off on “ships that could never make it?” I don’t remember that mentioned in the film.
4) Why is a mere sergeant giving orders to conduct planetary devastation to an officer?
He’s right Von, your knowledge of make believe future space army heirachies is laughable. LAUGHABLE!!!
And where were the time-travelling killer robots from the even more distant future? Hmmm…? WHERE WERE THEY???
False Prophet;
You took that overpriced ripoff Movie way to seriously. And most of all please I know the representation of hierarchies are way a askewed, but The last thing I would take seriously.
I wanted to bomb the shit out of virtual “Pandora” when after I walked out this crappy movie to.